I need a personal statement of no more than 4300 characters long, including spaces. that means spaces and apostrophes etc are accounted. this is basically 1 page single spaced
It is for dental program: prompt simply asks to write about why Im pursuing/interested dentistry
Here is what I would like for the personal statement be reflected of :
Growing up, i never had a true father figure, it was really my mom and my grandfather who i grew up with, those were the people who played a instrumental part throughout my life. I never got to know my granddad from from my father side, he passed away a year before i was born. However my grandfather from my mother side (the one who was present during my life) were best friends from our home country. During my youth, he would tell me stories and share about himself and my granddad and through him I got to know both people. I guess a 2 for 1 kind of thing. So i grew up with a strong bond and friendship with my grandfather. He had a keen intuition, when we were young (my siblings and I), he would greet us by Doctor or engineer up untill we were in college, and with this intuition, was all true. my siblings became what he called us by profession as children and as young adults. My siblings grew up to be doctors or engineer.With me he would called me “Doctarh Dondhan” meaning Doctor of teeth in our respective language. And truth me he knew more about me than I did myself and saw something in me that wasn’t apparent to no one else. But he was right. I grew up interested in the field, I shadowed multiple physicians (plastic surgeons, pediatricians, etc) but nothing was as intriguing and nor was it career path i sought best for my abilities/capabilities.
*My original goal during high school senior year and college was in pursuing dentistry. however, due to life mistakes, immaturity lead me to in a path that led me away from my goals. from 4.0 GPA (grade point average) to academic suspension. I knew there was more to me that i had to discovered and understand so i took sometime off to get to know myself. I grew up in a middle eastern household where typical american social life was nonexistent. My college graduation was severely extended from the norm. rather than graduting on time, in 4 years, i graduated in 6. (just to put the extent of my mistakes and development)
In college i lost myself, i knew i needed to grow and development before pursuing a career as a health professional.
AS i begun to sort myself out, progress in school and align my studies applying to dental school and get back on track my grandfather was diagnosed with lung cancer. that was huge turning point for me. My mother and I were his primary caretakers, As I was the only sibling at home, attending my local university. I was glad to do so. He always wanted to see me graduate college, and always wanted updates in what i was doing in school growing up. Towards half way to his illness (about 7 months before his passing) when i was walking him to the restroom, even with his struggle and pain he turned to me and ask “when was i graduating” I said to him this semester> he said “if I am alive till then, I would love to see you graduate”. I tired to graduate in an accelerated rate, taking a dense course load that semester, so he was able to see me graduate from college. but due to my past mistakes he wasn’t able to. I learned my many mistakes and know what is valuable to me and what i want to do.
Now, in addition to what i wrote above. there are other reasons why dentistry. here they are:
So i will leave that up to you how to structure this and make it an overall appealing personal statement!!!
I will give a bonus if the work is amazing! on top of overall payment ($$)
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