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Essay question: What are the primary causes and/or immediate effects of the current food waste crisis? What are some possible solutions to this crisis.

teacher comment:

INTRODUCTION: Well-developed introductory paragraph contains detailed background information, a clear explanation or definition of the problem, and a thesis statement which includes limited subject and attitude.

CONCLUSION: summarizes main topics, but is repetitive. No suggestions for change and/or opinions are included.

MAIN POINTS: Body: Main are well developed with supporting details. Successful use of PIE format.

USE OF SOURCES: All source material is used and smoothly integrated into the text. All sources are accurately documented and in the desired format on the Works Cited page. All sources are relevant and reliable. Sources must be only from the prompt list unless you talked to me about it.

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