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ENG 1302 Concorde Career College Asynchronous Online Learning Discussion

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my Teacher sent me her feedback about the paper . Could you abject it to me I will send you her feedback her

It’s obvious you put a great deal of work into this assignment, even going so far as to perform your own case study. However, this assignment is a basic research paper centered around three key ideas.

I believe that I found your thesis tucked in the middle of the abstract. Basically, you’re saying the following:
Possible thesis: Asynchronous online communication, textbooks, and educator developed materials can cultivate imagination when taking online courses.

Do you think these ideas are in the most emphatic order? In other words, is communication the least effective and teacher created materials are the most impactful? Rearrange it to your liking and make it the last sentence of your introduction, which isn’t very engaging at the present moment.

Start your introduction with an anecdote about how most students don’t like online classes, or that online classes aren’t as impactful or engaging as their on-ground counterparts. Then, explain how it is possible to improve with right tools and lead into your thesis statement.

After that, you are going to do a bit of reorganization to get all the similar ideas together. For the sake of clarity, add some subheadings like Communication, Textbooks, and Educator Developed Materials.

Speaking of subheadings, delete the ones that you included for your personal case study.Also, you might want to limit the amount of information you include in the final draft. Focus more on your secondary sources (articles written by subject matter experts).
Finally, your references should be listed in alphabetical order.

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