Hey everyone,
I have this paper that is 6 page-long, i want you to make it 2-3 pages and choose the best ones and make it more academic and correct every mistake in there. plz. also, i have a peer review from my partner please look at it below. Please no plagiarism. please on time.
peer review from partner:
Your analysis draft is well done. The analysis of the entire webpage is very thorough with much detail about every section of the page. However, while there is much analysis about each section of the page, the analysis is missing analysis of the entire page as well as any kind of analysis of why the author or webpage designer may have decided to do what they did. In simpler terms, there’s a lot of analysis of the design and layout of the webpage, but it would be nice to see a bit more analysis as to why the author or designer designed the page in that specific way. Also try to avoid being too repetitive with the beginning of your sentences. There are certain sections of the memo where many sentences begin with the phrase “each section.”
The only other thing that concerns me is the format of the draft document. Just as a reminder, the assignment is required to be 2-3 pages single spaced. The assignment tab on UTC Learn contains many more details about the assignment which could help if its needed. Other than the things mentioned, it is a really good analysis to read.
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