ORDER YOUR PAPER AND GET QUALITY FOR YOUR MONEY
Notes from my Professor:”–Check that the main ideas in the paragraphs are placed at the beginnings of your paragraphs–Work on your opening line to make it more dynamic–Make your thesis statement much more specific, and limit the focus. Choose one of the four items your list, make an assertion about it, and include why your finding is important–During the editing stage, revise for “conciseness” (eliminate unnecessary or weak wording)–Your point about both cultures enduring destitution and horrific memories: flesh this idea out more. Why is this significant? How specifically did those situations result in specific characteristics within the two cultures? You mention it affects how we are more empathetic to the cultures today; however, how did these defeats influence how each culture saw themselves?“
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