Add table content and data to develop the paper ON ( basal/resting metabolic rate, The effects of fasting and exercising /resting metabolic rat/ the effects of aerobic activity on the human body, aerobic training while fasting. ) until you make it 28 total pages.
Please read through the paper You will find out Sentence that hard to understand for the reader and Grammar mistakes . focus on the topics and add data from the articles you have used make the paper engaging and develop more Knowledgeable.
MAKE SURE YOU FOCUS ON
# Proposal Objectives
Objectives are well articulated; Introduces and presents paper effectively and clearly; purpose is apparent to the reader.
# Project Methods and Overall Design
Project Design is clear, logical and well written
-Methods is clearly outlined and sufficient to meet the proposed objectives
-Develops paper as assigned, providing a robust and accurate summary of analysis of chosen research topic; critiques ideas with great insight and shows a thoughtful, in-depth analysis of each.
# Documentation and support
Ideas are supported effectively by research and sources are clearly attributed.
# Portfolio and Progress
Several clear drafts are present. This work shows a very strong portfolio of progressively improving work. Significant effort is shown.
#Organization
Arranges ideas clearly and logically to support the purpose or argument; ideas flow smoothly and are effectively linked; reader can follow the line of reasoning
# Writing mechanics and APA Format
Writing demonstrates a sophisticated clarity, conciseness, and correctness
Uses APA format accurately and consistently
After you finish from the paper make a clear outline of each part you have talk about it.
please try your best to make it better paper
Thank you
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