For this draft, you will not be using the group pages. Instead, you will need to find two people to read your draft and offer suggestions. These people may be family, friends, colleagues, or classmates–it is up to you. Follow these steps:
1. Have them read your essay and ask them to explain what your main idea is and at least three suggestions for improvement. This helps you by having someone new read your work and ensures that your points are clear to the average reader.
2. Write down who read your essay and summarize his/her suggestions.
3. Submit the names of the people who read your draft and a summary of the suggestions made for your essay.
The intention is to help strengthen your writing by opening up your audience.
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