I need someone that is familiar with Linguistic Principles that can help to ensure that my final paper meets the rubric completely. You will need to revise my milestone papers and organize them into cohesive final work, including a well-written conclusion. Below are the comments that I received on each of the attached milestones that will need to be addressed:
Milestone 1 Professor Feedback:
Thank you for this initial sequence to start your linguistic writing project in the right path. Just a few comments:
-First off, thank you for a nicely formatted paper.
-I do like this initial background information on the respective pieces of literature as we make our way through the first page.
-Likewise, I like how you are beginning to apply morphological and phonological language nuance to the respective pieces of literature. It looks like you have already given this aspect of the assignment some serious consideration, and I do appreciate this.
-And what an interesting commentary regarding prefixes, consistent ones, no less, and Dracula. And I imagine it would stand to reason when you consider the rather dark thematic undertone that exists throughout this iconic novel.
And thank you for the complete citation.
Milestone 2 Professor Feedback:
Thank you for the second sequence in the overall writing project. Just a few comments:
-As always, thank you for a nicely formatted paper.
-I’m looking at your initial category of semantic perspectives, and your first two paragraphs actually reads more like a summary of your respective pieces of literature instead of actually shedding a bit of light from a semantic standpoint. See if you might add a few more linguistic-related examples here.
-You register levels as well seem to be a bit confusing. Remember that register is largely isolating tone and emotional trajectory, or the lack thereof.
-Likewise, and regarding dialect, I think what may have happened here in your paper is that you are briefly touching upon the various categories but are simply not including specific, language -related examples.
And thank you for the complete citations. For the next sequence, though, just remember to place them into alphabetical order.
Milestone 3 Professor Feedback:
Thank you for this third sequence of the overall linguistic writing project. Just a few comments:
-First off, thank you for a nicely formatted paper.
-I do like how you initially give us a bit of background information on the respective pieces of literature, but then you start to gradually indicate many of the changes that would need to be made to one of your selections.
-Very good integration of material from the literature selection itself as well.
-Overall, it looks like you really have approached each of the various categories within this third sequence with a fair amount of attention. The analysis is solid, nicely orchestrated, and clearly reflects your understanding of the material.
-Very interesting commentary regarding environmental, historical, and cultural factors.
And thank you for the complete citations.
Be sure to read the rubric thoroughly.
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