The paper attached needs some modificationsThe topic is Lack of emplyment oppurtunities in the urban minority communities.
Pleasse Elaborate on some of the causes of unemployment in urban communities.
Provide some background information about unemployment in urban communitiesed the highlighted part changed
What is generally known about unemployment in the context of urban communities? What is the rate of unemployment in urban communities? What are some examples of communities that are considered urban?
Also A writing tutor suggested the following:
You do not focus one body paragraph on only one main point. In the second paragraph, you begin by talking about the origin of unemployment in urban communities. Then, you talk about two causes of this issue, technology and and self-employment. However, discussing the origin with the two causes makes your work unorganized and makes you unable to elaborate on the origin and the two causes. Usually, when you write a body paragraph, you focus on one main point, so consider writing one paragraph each for the origin, technology, and self-employment. Consider this outline:
> Second paragraph: The origin of unemployment in urban communities
> Third paragraph: Technology as a cause of unemployment in urban communities
> Fourth paragraph: Self-employment as a cause of unemployment in urban communities
Please make sure the paper addresses the history of the problem, Origin, evolution over time, potetntial causual factors, Potential contributing factors, cause.effect Inter-relationships, factorssupporting discouraging change, interventions used to address th proble.
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